Sunday, April 28, 2013

Digital Storytelling: Week 6 Scriptwriting


OREO - Whisper Fight 2013 Super Bowl Commercial (http://youtu.be/rIDaX0eMeIk)


Video
Audio
1.          
Close up of Oreo cookie being held by a hand.

2.          
Wide shot of guy A, sitting in library, holding Oreo and looking it over.
Guy A [whispers]: I’ve always preferred the cream part of an Oreo
3.          
Cut to medium shot of guy B sitting across the table from Guy A, with head in hand on desk

4.          
Wide shot of two guys sitting at table in library
Guy B [whispers]: That’s crazy. The cookie’s the best part.
5.          
Fast close ups between the two guys as they argue about the best part of an Oreo. Guy A slams book shut. Guy B stands up and grabs table and overturns it.
Guy A [whispers]: Cream
Guy B [whispers]: Cookie
Guy A [whispers]: Cream
6.          
Women carrying a chair comes up behind Guy B and whacks him across the shoulders with the chair and it smashes on him.
Women whispers: Cream
7.          
Cut to medium shot of African American guy standing in book aisles of library. He pushes the bookshelf over, causing a domino effect with the other bookshelves. Cut to wide shot of bookshelves plowing into each other.
Guy whispers: Cookie
8.          
Cut to medium shot of an older man as he throws a computer monitor at a woman. The woman ducks and the monitor shatters through the window that was behind the woman.
Older man whispers: Cream
9.          
Woman stands up with a lamp in her hand and throws it across the library
Woman whispers: Cookie
10.      
Close up of lamp hitting the brick wall and smashing.

11.      
Cut to wide shot on library balcony. In the background a man and woman appear to be arguing. In the foreground, two guys are wrestling with each other. They wrestle through the banisters and fall on a desk on the floor below the balcony.
Guy 1 whispers: Creammmmmm
Guy 2 whispers: Cookie

Crashing sound of furniture breaking.

12.      
Close-up of lamp shattered on floor and flames catching on nearby curtain.
Cracking sound of lamp bulb bursting
Sound of flames erupting.

13.      
Cut to close up of fire alarm on the wall.
Fire alarm bell starts ringing.
14.      
Medium shot as firemen burst through a doorway with hoses gushing water into the library.
Firemen lengthy whisper: Fire
15.      
Cut to wide angle shot of entire library in upheaval. Furniture smashed. Books and sheets of paper all over the floor. People wrestling each other. Bookshelves on fire. Water from the fire hose crossing the room mid-air. Absolute pandemonium.
Muted screams and a dull background of whispers bouncing back and forth: Cookies. Cream. Cookies. Cream.
16.      
Cut to medium shot of librarian woman at the checkout desk. Close up of her holding phone, glasses around her neck, with her finger in the air.
Librarian whispers: I’m calling the cops!
17.      
Cut to outdoors shot as cop car pulls into library from the street. Car drives through library wall and into the building.
Papers go flying through the air.
Cop car sirens blaring.
Smashing sound of brick wall being destroyed by the cop car.
18.      
Cop gets out of car with megaphone and addresses the library patrons.
Cop whispers into megaphone: You guys have to stop fighting. We’re the cops!
19.      
Cut to white screen with Oreo cookie rolling apart.

Left side Oreo is cookie facing up. Right side Oreo is cream facing up. In between, “Something we can all disagree on” on blue ribbon.

“Choose your side on Instagram @Oreo” at bottom of screen.

(NFL logo)
V/O: Choose your side on Instagram. At Oreo.


YourBigIdea.CO | Featuring a Sky Waitress and Danica Patrick - Official Go Daddy Commercial (http://youtu.be/aE6ugHoIB_Q)


Video
Audio
1.          
Medium shot in a typical living room. American couple sitting on couch facing camera. She’s reading a local newspaper. He’s holding the TV TV remote control.
Kell: Hey Joe, when are you ever gonna put your idea online.
Joe: Relax Kell. It’s not like anyone else is gonna have the…
2.          
Cut to medium shot of Indian couple sitting on couch, in a typical Indian home, facing camera. She’s reading a local newspaper, wearing traditional Indian attire and he’s wearing a turban, holding a TV TV remote control.
Indian guy: exact same
3.          
Cut to medium shot of English couple sitting in their traditional English-style living room, facing camera. She’s reading a local newspaper and he’s holding a TV remote control.
English guy: idea that popped
4.          
Cut to medium shot of African couple sitting in their safari-styled living room, facing camera. She’s reading a local newspaper and he’s holding a TV remote control.
African guy: into my head
5.          
Cut to medium shot of Asian couple sitting in their oriental-style living room, facing camera. She’s reading a local newspaper and he’s holding a TV remote control.
Asian woman: How you know
6.          
Cut back to MS of American couple
Kell: no one
7.          
Cut to MS of Indian couple
Indian woman: else has thought
8.          
Cut to MS of English couple
English woman: of it Harry?
9.          
Close up of Joe
Joe: Because they haven’t Kelly.
10.      
CS of Indian guy
Indian guy: It’s totally original.
11.      
CS of Asian guy
Asian guy: It’s one in a gazillion.
12.      
CS of Indian woman looking disbelievingly at her spouse
Indian woman: Oh really?!
13.      
CS of Asian woman looking disbelievingly at her spouse
Asian woman: really?
14.      
CS of English woman looking disbelievingly at her spouse
English woman: really?
15.      
Close up of Joe
Joe: It’s idiot proof.
16.      
CS of Indian guy
Indian guy: A real money maker.
17.      
Cut to close up of pompous, yuppy American guy, smuggly dressed in a suit with shirt half unbuttoned, sitting in a private jet, holding a glass of champagnge.
American guy: And thank goodness I put it online first.
18.      
Cut to MS of interior of private, luxurious jet. Woman and man sitting in chairs. Sky waitress standing behind them, serving champagne.
Sky waitress: More champagne sir?
American guy: More everything Sky Waitress.

Laughter from all
19.      
Cut to CS of Danica Patrick piloting the plane and laughing.
Danica: Ha ha ha ha.
20.      
Cut back to medium shot of interior of plane, where man, woman and sky waitress continue to laugh fakely.
All: Ha ha ha ha ha
21.      
GoDaddy.co logo

#YourBigIdea
V/O: Don’t wait. Register your big idea as a dot co domain at Go Daddy

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